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澳门马王:2020年11月21日雅思大作文分析+范文(20年雅思名师金长麟分析)

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2020.11.21雅思大作文原题

Some people think young people should have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

金长麟(20年雅思写作名师)雅思大作文解析

今天的考题是之前G类的题目今天在A类考察。最近的预测就感觉家庭教育和教育类会老题重现,本周的预测课也专门讲解了相关类别!

这个题目在A类中的考察是:

Everyone should stay in school until the age of 18 eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

与今天题目的不同之处在与一个偏重于全日制教育一个偏重于18岁。但其实是一个题目,因为18岁以下的不是全日制教育的不多见。

所以今天的题目正方在写接受全日制教育到18岁的好处,反方是讨论这样做可能带来的弊端:比如对家庭的压力。但是这个题目基本是倾向甚至一边倒。接受教育和接受足够长的教育好处很多,这毋庸置疑。那么反方就只能写特定情况来反驳,比如穷人家庭,但社会的义务教育在解决这一问题。再比如没有接受教育就成功的人,但这不是社会主流。

正方

While most students who study until eighteen are more or less sure of a fair chance at beginning their career, the dropouts would often find it difficult. Getting a school certificate can mean the difference between a hard-working manual type of life or an easier, more comfortable life. 对比接受和没有接受足够教育的人

In developing countries, all children and young people must stay in school till they finish primary school education and being ready for university. It can change a country’s fortune. 对于国家的积极影响

反方

It is worth noticing that many successful entrepreneurs are school dropouts, and they employ thousands of school graduates. 有特例,但不是主流

澳门马王参考范文

(来自网络,可以借鉴观点逻辑不能使用范文原段)

It is generally acknowledged that many school-aged young adults miss out on full-time education. Thus, some educationalists argue that students aged under 18 should receive compulsory full-time education. I agree with this statement.

There is no doubt that young adults who receive an education (including schools and college) would greatly benefit from this experience, for they have more opportunities to improve their life prospects. If they have one or more years of studying, they could access sufficient and adequate provision and support. For example, they may learn how to put theory into practice, thus enhancing their practical work skills. As a result, it would make it easier for them to climb the career ladder in future work.

Besides, this may produce positive outcomes for society as a whole. As more young people could access provision and support in terms of education and jobs, youth unemployment may be controlled and reduced. Evidence shows that those who have A-levels education tend to earn more than those who drop out of school earlier.

However, there are, of course, some potential issues. One main problem is the financial burden on families and individuals since they have to pay more tuition fees. Another issue is that some students may become demotivated. The reason lies in the fact that they may want to pursue their dreams in other fields. However, these issues could be addressed strategically through the efforts of communities and schools.

In conclusion, I believe that anything that could enable young people to become economically and academically active and able society members should be adopted.

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金澳门马王雅思教学20年,在过去一年中,45场考试命中38场小作文,25场以上大作文原题及相似题。

市面上其他机构预测的逻辑——就是雅思机构整理一个庞大全面的题库,可能20多篇(这个数字只会更大),你拿到这个预测之后去复习。但是只要这个题库里面有这个题目,机构就可以说命中了,但是你们究竟有没有复习到,那就不一定了,理论上只要题库够全面,命中就没什么问题。但是准确度非常差,也不是我们所说的预测的概念了。

每一场雅思考试,金长麟都会为同学们做的写作预测,不是市面上其他澳门马王给你的大范围的预测,我们的预测题库一般在5个左右。。

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